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Post by highvoltage on Oct 19, 2008 21:39:40 GMT -4
// Monica Tweed is shown sitting in a chair, an empty chair a couple of feet to her right. She is fidgeting, and constantly checking her watch.
Monica Tweed: "Where is he? He was supposed to be here twenty minutes ago! Some superstar he's supposed to be!"
// As if he was waiting for her to refer to him as a superstar, High Voltage enters the room. He is dressed in a baggy black pair of jeans, a black shirt with some red writing, and a sideways red hat. He struts to his chair and takes a seat.
High Voltage: "What's poppin' ma?"
Monica Tweed: "What's popping? You being on time is what should have popped- You know what forget it..."
// Monica adjusts her position in her chair and faces Voltage, restarting the interview.
Monica Tweed: "We're here with High Voltage, one of the most recent signings here at Generation eXcess. Volt, good to have you."
High Voltage: "Fo' sho baby. Nice ta see yo fine self."
Monica Tweed: "Uhm. Was that a compliment?"
High Voltage: "Word."
Monica Tweed: "Well in that case thanks. Moving on, what do you hope to bring to GX?"
// Before answering the question, Voltage shifts his hat to the other side, obviously meaning business.
High Voltage: "One thing. Respect. Dats it ya digg. Respect. Nuttin mo', nuttin less."
Monica Tweed: "Respect, very interesting. How exactly do you plan on bringing this respect?"
High Voltage: "Doin' what I gotta do. Winnin' dem matches, 'n makin' sho ma crew is at da top."
Monica Tweed: "You mentioned a crew. Who exactly is apart of this crew?"
High Voltage: "Aint no crew jus' yet. Gotta earn yo spot in ma crew. Unless o' course you wanna spot ma. You mighty fine."
// Monica blushes with Voltage's second compliment, and hesitates for a second, still flustered.
Monica Tweed: "Well, um, I'll, uh, think about it. That looks like all the time we have hear, I wish you luck here at GX, and I'm sure you'll be hearing from us again soon."
High Voltage: "True, true. Real soon I hope ma. So I guess I'll be out den. Peace!"
// High Voltage gets up from his seat, throws up a gang sign, and exits.
Ooc: Let me know what you guys think!!
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Post by Black Spirit on Oct 20, 2008 11:27:22 GMT -4
ooc: I don't want you to change your character's gimmick but, to be honest, if I put this interview on the show we'll be getting low votes. Why? Because GMs and TWG staffs prefer good grammar and when they see something like this they think the GM of that roster is lazy and prefer typing like that because it's faster.
I'd suggest you to slow a little bit all of the slang. Have just a couple for interview. It'd even make your character look better.
As I said, I don't mean you to change your gimmick. It's just for the show's benefits.
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Post by Attempt 2 on Oct 20, 2008 16:54:12 GMT -4
// Monica Tweed is shown sitting in a chair, an empty chair a couple of feet to her right. She is fidgeting, and constantly checking her watch.
Monica Tweed: "Where is he? He was supposed to be here twenty minutes ago! Some superstar he's supposed to be!"
// As if he was waiting for her to refer to him as a superstar, High Voltage enters the room. He is dressed in a baggy black pair of jeans, a black shirt with some red writing, and a sideways red hat. He struts to his chair and takes a seat.
High Voltage: "What's poppin'?"
Monica Tweed: "What's popping? You being on time is what should have popped- You know what forget it..."
// Monica adjusts her position in her chair and faces Voltage, restarting the interview.
Monica Tweed: "We're here with High Voltage, one of the most recent signings here at Generation eXcess. Volt, good to have you."
High Voltage: "Fo' sho baby. Nice to see your fine self."
Monica Tweed: "Uhm. Was that a compliment?"
High Voltage: "Word."
Monica Tweed: "Well in that case thanks. Moving on, what do you hope to bring to GX?"
// Before answering the question, Voltage shifts his hat to the other side, obviously meaning business.
High Voltage: "One thing. Respect. That's it, you dig. Respect. Nothing more, nothing less."
Monica Tweed: "Respect, very interesting. How exactly do you plan on bringing this respect?"
High Voltage: "Doing what I gotta do. Winning matches, and making sure my crew is at the top."
Monica Tweed: "You mentioned a crew. Who exactly is apart of this crew?"
High Voltage: "Aint no crew yet. Hafta earn a spot in my crew. Unless of course you wanna spot. You fine."
// Monica blushes with Voltage's second compliment, and hesitates for a second, still flustered.
Monica Tweed: "Well, um, I'll, uh, think about it. That looks like all the time we have hear, I wish you luck here at GX, and I'm sure you'll be hearing from us again soon."
High Voltage: "True, true. Real soon. Peace!"
// High Voltage gets up from his seat, throws up a gang sign, and exits.
Ooc: Edited. Is it good now or no?
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Post by highvoltage on Oct 20, 2008 16:55:34 GMT -4
Ooc: Haha, whoops. Forgot to log in when I edited it. I was wondering why there was no edit button...
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Post by Black Spirit on Oct 21, 2008 10:13:19 GMT -4
ooc: Better but you could still slow it a little more in future posts.
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